peerrrr+review

Jack Anderson 1. There is no title. 2. The main idea of the paper is that iguanas are a good pet for someone to have but they take a great deal of work to take care of. 3. He provides evidence to his claim when he talks about how the iguanas need a certain diet, amount of sun light, space, and attention. 4. The positive point of the paper is how much fun owning a iguana can be. 5. The strong points of the paper are is that is you keep your iguana healthy they will live a long a happy life. 6. The part that needed the most explanation to me was where he said he adopted an iguana. Where can you do that? 7. My knowledge of iguanas broadened significantly, I now know they take a great deal of effort to create a healthy habitat for them. 8. Some of my suggestions for improving your paper would be to do an outline and get what you are going to talk about in each paragraph. they paper seemed a bit choppy to me. But still got its point across. 9. yes 10. yes

Cody 1. Yes, the title electric guitar tells me exactly what he is going to be talking about. 2. The main idea of the paper is to tell the history of the electric guitar, from its invention to present day. 3. He provides evidence to his claim by talking about the inventor of the guitar, to who modified to it how it is today. 4. The positive values in the paper are that people knew there was a product needed and they made it and it revolutionized the way we listen to music today. 5. The strongest points was his facts and paragraph structure that divided all the points. 6. The part that needed more explanation would be what the future of what is coming out now in guitars. 7. I now know the history of the electric guitar. 9. yes 10. yes